I have posted this logo design to the forum as I wasn’t too sure how I could improve it more but I definitely wanted some advice on how to make it less cluttered.
I was given the advice to make the lines of the plants thinner to give it a more hand drawn look and to make the stroke of the type thicker to make it stand out more.
I definitely think that this makes the logo look a lot less cluttered and makes the logo look a lot better. I think that when this logo is printed onto a uniform it will make it stand out a lot more. I really like the way the thin lines look on with the plant. I think that it makes the logo look less cluttered and makes it look a lot more delicate. I think that this adds to the natural tone of the business.